Critiques

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Alex Shaver

The words that catches my focus was quiet and creepy because of the size and font. The scary bleeding font for the word creepy is a good font for it they both have a connection. The quiet is big and draws more attention to the bottom of the page. The negative should be filled with more words or bigger words.

Katie Williams

I like how the words serious, smart, and shy stand out because of the boldness, size, and uniqueness of the words. The boldness of the word serious fits it well for that characteristic. The words smart and shy have a unique font which provides good balance in between the negative space and words.

Mary Fisk

I think there is a good balance between the negative space and the word characteristics. The word that you first see was the word focused because of how it makes the viewer focus into the bottom left corner. The other words like determined and hardworking have a nice font to it and it really fits.  Maybe a little bit more flow will be good.

Brianna Farr

For your top project on your blog, what really catchers my eye was the word creative because of the font. It was really interesting and feels right to the word creative. I feel that there is a little bit more negative space so maybe some of the words should be a little bigger. I'm not sure though if the word creative or the word adventurous should catch your eye because of the unique font or the size of the word.

Tyler Marshall

The word that catches my eye was the word outgoing because it was it feels like it was the main characteristic. There is good balance in space and the size of the word. Each word you have with a certain characteristic has good flow and i find this work to be unique.

Tri Do Essay - ah yeah

     I think my design has balance and the different variety of fonts that express the many characteristics of myself. The words I put the hierarchy in order are Guy, Shy, Childish, nice and quiet. Each word is unique because they have their own font that best way to show off those personalities.
     For the word guy, the size i chose was the biggest because it should make it obvious that I am a guy. I do not really know, but I think it should be the one that catches your eye or it the word Childish because it has more sort of uniqueness to it.
     The word shy should be one of the simple words because how else can shy be made unique  with the many fonts on illustrator.
     The word childish is one of the small words but its font is much more different than the others because the font and its design represents its child like aspect.
     For the words Nice and Quiet, they are pretty simple. I added a curve to the word nice and I made the word quiet, I made it on its side going down not like a normal word in text.
     I think this work of art shows most of the art elements but thats just my opinion.

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