There is a lot of dead space on this project, but otherwise it's got a great feel. Maybe the flow needs work though. I'm not certain where my eyes should go. I mean, there is some flow to it, but not so much.
The spacing in this piece is really good it covers the entire page. It constantly keeps your eyes moving around the page. The way he used repetition made the design a lot different than everyone elses. I liked the way he used different value in color for example in shy he made it very like while childish is very bold and eye catching. The only thing I don't really see is one focal point, the scale of the words could be changed alittle and then there would be one focal point.
I really like the words that you chose because they completely represent you. However i think there could be some more creativity in some words and less negative space. Adding color would improve this and rearranging the words to make shapes. Also i would suggest that you use more words and adjust them to fit their meanings. I really like the word Shy and how its lighter than all of the others because it gives it character and fully represents what it means.
There is a lot of dead space on this project, but otherwise it's got a great feel. Maybe the flow needs work though. I'm not certain where my eyes should go. I mean, there is some flow to it, but not so much.
ReplyDeleteThe spacing in this piece is really good it covers the entire page. It constantly keeps your eyes moving around the page. The way he used repetition made the design a lot different than everyone elses. I liked the way he used different value in color for example in shy he made it very like while childish is very bold and eye catching. The only thing I don't really see is one focal point, the scale of the words could be changed alittle and then there would be one focal point.
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ReplyDeleteI really like the words that you chose because they completely represent you. However i think there could be some more creativity in some words and less negative space. Adding color would improve this and rearranging the words to make shapes. Also i would suggest that you use more words and adjust them to fit their meanings. I really like the word Shy and how its lighter than all of the others because it gives it character and fully represents what it means.
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